无老师精析：如何找到通向高分作文的路径

　　本段文章还是书接上次的那篇满分作文，务必要做到把这篇满分作文细细的分析透才可罢休。这篇30分的作文，真的是唱作俱佳，德艺双馨^_^，貌似这是郭德纲老师的标准。其实当各位考生准备托福作文的时候，最难的不是去练，也不是去模仿。其实最难的是缺乏一个标准，不知道写到什么程度才算是高分的作文。这才是限制广大考生的最关键的瓶颈。也就是为什么很多考生能考到20分，甚至23分，但是从此以后就很难再进一步提升，就是这个原因。希望无老师对这篇文章的分析，能够对各位考友有所启发，找到通向高分作文的路径^_^

　　无老师优秀范例：Firstly, art museums and music performance center is no more important than recreational facilities. Admittedly, art museums and music performance is of great importance. Confucius, greatest Chinese philosopher, commented, “Art helps a person gets a better life.” To go to art museums to appreciate those art works and to go the music performance center to listen to symphony help people get improvement in mental life. But it does not mean thatrecreational facilities take the second place.

　　无老师中文翻译：第一点，艺术馆和音乐厅远比不上娱乐设施重要。我们必须承认，艺术馆和音乐厅也是有其自身的价值的。孔子，一个伟大的中国的哲学家，就曾经说过：“艺术会赋予人更愉悦的生活”。去艺术馆欣赏艺术品，和去音乐厅聆听交响乐可以帮助我们改善自己的精神世界。但这并不意味着娱乐设施就没有艺术馆和音乐厅重要。

　　无老师平庸示例：First, recreational facilities are more important than art museums and music performance center. We believe art museums and music performance center values a lot. Confucius, greatest Chinese philosopher, said art may give more pleasure. Watching art in the art museums, and Listening the music in the music performance center can improve our spirit world. But it does not mean recreational facilities is less improtant than art museums and music performance center.

　　无老师精析：优秀范例先来：Firstly, art museums and music performance center is no more important than recreational facilities.对比平庸范例First, recreational facilities are more important than art museums and music performance center.