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  Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examplesto support your answer.

  参考分析:

  总体上,“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步[37],所以自然会带来improvement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化:

  好的:

  节省时间,越来越方便,一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

  也有不好的变化:

  准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动,可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少了,比如“速冻饺子”[quick-frozen dumpling]

  快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是,人们普遍变胖了,尤其是孩子

  相关题目:[13]

  3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯

  (1)食品容易准备,节省了大量的时间,使人们可以做其他事情

  (2)食品容易准备,为人们提供了更多的花样。

  (3)食品容易准备,为人们的健康带来了很多好处

  【精选例文讲解

  Topic 3 Has the easiness of cookingimproved life?

  Food has always been the one of thegreatest wants of humankind. It has influenced almost every step that humankindhas taken. The search for food is the essence(本质,实质)of life. Therefore if food is easier to get and prepare it is a realboon(有喝倒彩的意思,理解起来就是贬义)tohumankind.(本段开门见山,没有多着笔墨,依旧是叙述一个常态,给出一个观点)

  Food is the most important of the threebasic amenities(令人愉快的事物,注意one of后面一定是复数)of life (water, food and shelter(庇护)). Though it can be argued that water is thesustenance(食物)for any life form, food is more important because if you do not havewater you will surely die. But if you are left with a scarcity(缺乏)of food it will lead to a very sickly and torturous life(虚弱和痛苦的生活). Nutritious food is very essential for life, food has been thecause of many a battle. Thus if food was easier to prepare it will take awayfrom the mind of the humankind a great burden.(many a译为许多;take away from译为减损;本段意在讲食物是三种基础需求里最重要的,然后通过假设没有水和没有食物来进行对比,从而推断出食物容易得到的话会减轻许多负担。)

  Though the preparation of food becomingeasier, which is considered a great blessing for humankind. The sudden rise inprocessed and canned food and all the junk food that one gets over the counter(直接交易)is not totally a boon. People who are so busy that they are not ableto spend time to prepare their food, develop a liking for these ready-to-eatjunk food. Though it might be thought of as a great way to save time, this is ashortsighted idea that could actually lead to a world of harm. Because one mustunderstand that even though junk food saves us a lot of time, the nutritionalvalue of the food is not so good. In reality the preservatives used in thesefoods are often found to be toxic in nature. Hence it defeats the purpose it issupposed to serve i.e., to provide nutritional value.(本段叙述了食物变得越来越便利,垃圾食品虽然生产迅速食用方便,却带给我们身体更糟糕的影响)

  Moreover since people do not take time toprepare food,the art of cooking is slowly vanishing.(这句话很文艺,烹饪艺术在慢慢消失)Actually cooking is a good way of releasing pressure that builds upfrom our professional commitments. Cooking can easily provide relief from allthe tensions that prevail in our life. In the past family weekend get togetherwas considered to be a good time to know each other and they used to spend timecooking food for the entire family. They used toexchange recipes and it was away of rewinding(倒回)after the hardweeklong labor. Thus thisjunk food has denied the human kind of one of humankind'soldest arts. It could even be termed as(被叫做)a retrograde(倒退的)step inhuman culture.(通过讲烹饪的好处,客观地说明现在食物便捷导致烹饪文化的逐渐落后,说明了食物便利的另一个缺点)

  Therefore I believe though the processedfood(加工过的食品)has made thepreparation of food much easier, it is not a good step for mankind.(结尾很随意,我认为可以总结一下前两段。本文依旧是经典分段A+A-A-类型。个人感觉这个话题似乎说的很抽象,不知道改说些什么方面,大家仔细想想如果是自己的话会怎么写,一般恶心的话题最适合动一动笔,经常考题里出的就是最恶心的你最想略过的题)

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