利用模板来写作托福,是一件具有风险的事情,那么该怎样用才能够帮助自己拿高分呢?今天出国留学网的小编就来介绍托福写作模板怎么用?
写作模板
大家在动笔以前必须要认真审题和构思,还要尽可能的明确写作的结构和内容,同时注意去观察写作要求,此点才是最重要的。
若根本就未认真的审题情况下,见题就写,没有严谨的写作思路,这样导致跑题,偏题,还与题意不符的错误,也就不能使托福写作模板中的句型和内容相匹配。
大家在最初练习写作时套用托福写作模板才是正常的事情,同时还是一个必经的过程,只有首先尝试使用其它人的东西,才能发现一些漏洞,这样才可以在此基础上做自己的写作积累。
模板大家必须要做到活学活用,一定别一字不变的照抄无误,应该是按照自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词,长句,而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达,这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生再平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组,以备写作之用。另外,关于写作素材,不仅仅指写作常用的词汇,句型或者语法结构,还要包括所用的事例。因此,在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材,积累词句,而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。
若考生们真的对一个话题没有其它想法情况下,就去借鉴托福写作模板观点,那么大家还要对其做一些调整,又或是干脆在文里讲明这个思路是借鉴了哪一本参考书的,如此是能够使考生们显得很真诚。
提醒考生们在语言的运用上能够使用有的新托福写作范文的句式,但是绝对不能照抄原文。如果不会改写句式,那么换掉一些关键词。或者如果要借用关键词,则必须使用别的句式就是解决的办法之一。
范文一篇
“Some people like to buy a piece of technological device as soon as it is available in the market. Other people prefer to buy it after many people have adopted it. Which do you prefer?”
对于购买电子科技设备而言,有些人喜欢在它一上市的时候就买,而有些人则喜欢等到很多人用过之后才买,你更喜欢什么时候购买呢?
When a new piece of technological device, usually an electronic gadget, is launched, there must be long queues of people who cannot wait to own it. On the other hand, there are patient people, who wait until the market calms down. Although passion is not necessarily undesirable, patience is more adoptable.
For one thing, if a consumer could stay calm, he or she would likely have an economical deal or even a bargain. As consumer electronics are updated so frequently that the original high price of a model can hardly remain long, it is not smart to purchase a device when it is newly available and at its peak price. After the initial thrill, many early birds regret their impulse because they know that they have overpaid. It is therefore sensible to buy the device when the price drops to a reasonable level. As for the excitement of owning a new digital gear, as long as the device is new to its owner, it does not have to be the freshly available.
Here comes the follow-up question: for how long should a consumer wait? Usually a few months — when many people have owned it. A typical example is smart phones, whose old models are replaced with new ones annually. A consumer could wait for merely a few months and own the most recent model with a moderate expense of money, saving hundreds of dollars.
中心句:Waiting is a rational decision also because consumers can be better-informed. Although it is exciting to chase the trend closely, those technological fashionistas can wind up feeling disappointed. When they purchase a newest model of tablet or a most cutting-edgy wearable item, they often have no idea or only a vague idea of how these products actually feel—the appearance, the tactility, the weight and the functionality. At the moment they open the box, any feature that is below their expectations can upset them. Contrarily, patience makes winners. It is particularly advantageous that ‘late arrivals’, who have probably learned the strengths and weaknesses of a device from the feedback of ‘early birds’, are well prepared for the item. Especially unsurprised by the drawbacks, those patient shoppers are less likely to be ripped off .
In conclusion, first, if a technological product is purchased at a supposedly lower price, it is more worth the money; second, if the decision of purchasing is based on others’ user experience as reference, it may be more reasonable. For these two reasons as the minimum, it is better to buy a technological device when the initial heat is gone than when the tide is high.
Comment
1. 词句使用:
a) 句法结构丰富且自然:没有过度堆砌语法结构而造成阅读困难、冗余、油腻,作为范文可以帮助学生建立正确的导向,防止一味追求复杂结构。
b) 词汇地道且自然:并没有追求长难罕见词,但大量使用了学生普遍认识但未必会用的词汇,恰如其分,没有明显的中文痕迹。
2. 谋篇布局:没有明显的模板痕迹,文脉流畅。
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