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托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误

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2017-12-27 22:32

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  托福考生人数在增加,很多人关注托福写作问题,托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误有哪些呢?想必是不少出国人士比较关心的问题,和出国留学网托福栏目一起来看看托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误!欢迎阅读。

  托福写作常犯的一些基础性错误

  一、用词不当

  例如:In the show, if participators answer twenty problemsthat the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize. problems应改为questions。

  二、拼写错误

  这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

  例如:This arguement is not valid.arguement应该为argument

  三、乱用大词

  First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

  这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题:

  1.该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

  2.although和but是不能连用的;

  3.指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么。

  四、中式表达

  例如:The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

  五、表意重复

  1.They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。

  2.The show is so compellingbut attractive. compelling和attractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

  六、固定用法错误

  例如:To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

  To some extends应改为To some extent

  七、例证夸张

  例如:For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death. 虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。

  八、成分多余

  例如:According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows thatthere is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs. 该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

  九、词性混乱

  例如:However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

  十、时态错误

  托福作文一般使用现在时态,除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.claimed应该改为claim

  以上十种基础性的问题同学们一定要多加注意,这样才能在托福考试中考出最好的成绩。下面智课小编托福写作老师也为大家分享一些托福写作经典的句型,使用经典的句型可以为你的作文增色呢~

  1. Life is not fair,get used to it.

  2. The world won't care about your self-esteem. The world will expect you to accomplish something before you feel good about yourself.

  3. You will not make 40 thousand dollars a year right out of high school. You won't be a vice president with a car,until you earn both.

  4. If you think your teacher is tough,wait till you get a boss. He doesn't have tenure.

  5. Flipping burgers is not beneath your dignity. Your grandparents had a different word for burger flipping; they called it opportunity.

  6. If you mess up,it's not your parents' fault,so don't whine about your mistakes, learn from them.

  7. Life is not divided into semesters. You don't get summers off and very few employers are interested in helping you find yourself. Do that on your own time.

  8. Television is NOT real life. In real life people actually have to leave the coffee shop and go to jobs.

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